Who is Jacky Ly?
Salutation stranger, feel free to twerk or whatever you like to do. Starting off a conversation with three words. The question of identification. I am Jacky Ly. A 17 year old teen that squints his eyes and smiles at you. I am proceeding in the academics in Grade 12 and still deciding on what to be when I graduate after High school. I enjoy writing poems and anything related to poetry, other English assignments such as essays and ISU's are less enjoyable to me. I'm a musician, I play the guitar, I believe that's the instrument with the black and white keys on a horizontal position right? The ukulele is the second instrument I play. Who wouldn't want to pull out a small guitar and play I'm yours, somewhere over the rainbows and other songs that sends you a picture about Hawaii, the beach, summer, or vacation days? I love being active through playing sports or going to the fitness centre. The sports I enjoy playing are tennis, soccer, and badminton. I'm a friendly and easy to get a long with. I hope we can understand each other and say, we're friends.
Jacky, you're getting close to the deadline here. I hope you're planning to comment on the assigned video as well. I am supportive of the casual tone of your writing here, but you alternate between sentence fragments (incomplete thoughts) and run on sentences (where periods should separate individual thoughts). The easiest way to repair this would be for me to sit with you and work through it. Your grammatical structure is also a bit off. For example, it should be "The ukulele is my second instrument" or "The ukulele is the second instrument I play." You have a random capital on summer,and the various sports names. The word remind is plural when it should be singular because songs is plural.
ReplyDeleteIt like your enthusiasm, don't be discouraged. When you watch the video you'll understand.